we had two professional guests come into our media group to watch our pieces and help review and evaluate our work. Myra was the film professional, so she was the one who evaluated my work. she gave me great feedback on how to improve my work and i am currently in the progress of doing these improvements:
. reframe still shot of jack - focus more on him
. don't say then repeat in writing whats happening
. see if can get past problem of alarm clock
. speed of getting ready
. redo camera shot to have inside cupboard
. try not to do american accent in voice over
with this evaluation and the ones from my audience, i hope to really create a near professional piece
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