i have taken my reviews and have changed my title of my product and have recorded a new voice over. the only thing i have left to do is to create and add a logo to my film, this will be my next objective.
i am much happier with my new product but still believe a have a few things to sort out.

audience review: Ben F - the camera work is good and the editing is done to a good standard. the overall film has improved but some of the background sound comes though which makes it difficult to hear what the narrator is saying.